Telescoping is a technique that stresses close observation by the writer. The sentence works like a telescope. The Telescoping sentence keeps moving closer and closer upon ideas in the previous clause.
"The girl sits on the bench."
Telescoping "The girl" : "The girl, wearing a red dress, sits on the bench."
Telescoping "the bench" : "The girl sits on the bench, which is placed in the Central Park of New York."
Telescoping "sits" : The girl sits, crossed legs, on the bench"
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